Changes in narrative

We have decided to change a few things in our narrative in conjunction with our earlier narrative post. We will not have credits shown on an actual envelope in the opening scene as we think this will cause a dip in the intensity of a thriller by creating a slightly more humorous context. The credits will just show as text like the other credits.

The other change we have decided to make is the transition between The first scene and the second made to be two days earlier. We were going to just have text at the bottom saying two days earlier but instead we will use a transition to show this subliminally. By using a picture of the victim on the investigators desk we can show that he is the subject being thought about. This will then blend in with the other scene of The Victim running.